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chiharu-tanaka
2008-09-04
ch 8,
abuseMan, i read the whole fic through and gosh, it made my day! I can't wait for the continuation! Plus, you made me like the Vergil x Lady pairing. XD
MOONLIGHT SHADOW HUNTRESS
2008-09-04
ch 8,
abuseThis was a good chapter. Vergil was very sneaky, making lady believe that dante wanted to apologize then sealing them away in his gym so they could work out their differences.

Nevan, Angi and Rudra are hilarious!

I especially liked the the part where Rudra asked: "what is a dick and Nevan offers to show them.

Vergil then orders her to STAY in her devil form.

That little section had me gigling. good job on the chapter.

Cant wait to see more.

^_^
666BloodyHell666
2008-09-03
ch 8,
abuseYAY! You finally updated!!
Anyway, I loved this chapter. Poor Lady, shes so clueless.
I do hope Dante and Lady "make up" soon, cause they're kinda like Brother and sister here.
Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Update soon
Kokiiru-kun
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuse30 minutes go I was on chaper two... I'm reviewing for chapter 8... I was supposed to be ASLEEP a half hour ago! -_-' Every time I got near the end of the chapeter I'd swear I was going to bed and then at the very end you'd write a line that forced me to read the next one. *Sobs* Why do I find all the addictive stories when I'm supposed to be in bed? *sigh* But it was SOO worth it. Vergil is in character but at the same time funny- I can't believe he has a sense of humor... And I'll bet Dante saw nothing wrong with what he said to Lady... Idiot. So, will Lady have more dreams about Vergil? Maybe he'll actually overhear one. -^-^-
chibi-suke07
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseAww... Dante laying on the couch playing his PSP gave me an adorable mental image. xD
Eric Draven201
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseThe sons of Sparda...Vergil, the master of seduction and Dante the love guru. lol.

Loved the chapter and I am absolutly thrilled to see this story updated once again. I do see Dante playing Loco Roco, but somehow I see him having the attention span of a goldfish, opting for something like Wario Ware... which are games basically made for people that have ADHD.
RikkuDevil
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseglad you updated :)

great chapter really funny what Vergil did to Dante and Lady and you gotta lov Nevan lol

cant wait for the next update dont wait to long before puttin it up :)

you can now see that things between Vergil and Lady are on the way now lol gotta love that pairing keep up the good story and writtn
LordxxAxelxxLover
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseRoflmao. I love the ending! But what I love the most in this chapter is the 'Arrow of Heaven' *faints from extreme laughter*
Mistress of Destruction
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseWow! Another awesome chapter! I love everything with Lady and Vergil (of course), but that last bit at the end with Vergil locking Dante and Lady in the same room together to sort things out was just wicked! Though poor Vergil having to deal with Nevan now, he he. Can't wait for the next chapter!

PS. I think Dante would just about enjoy any video game, but have you tried Crisis Core yet?
DevilWriter N
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseYet again, another chapter that rox!

OMG, I am just in love with Vergil in this story. He is just so incredibly creepy/smexy and I wouldn't have him any other way! LOL All of his hotly odd advances are brilliant, if Lady doesn't cave soon I'm gonna step in and scoop him up.

I love Lady's reactions to all of his actions too. I love the line about drinking gas and swallowing the lighted matches. Nice! Something Lady would totally think/say. When she runs away back to her room and frets about it all is great. 'There are quite a few things I'd like to show you'... OMG good one! Too bad Verg missed that one, or did he? LOL

Way cool story on the 'other' Vergil/Mary. Nicely done.

Ah and Dante... never fails to please. 'Sometimes you sound like you might've been eloquent in another life.' ... Dante's 'proud' response to that made me lmao. Only him.

Nice throwing the Devil Arms in there for the comedy. Love the exchanges on all that. Very funny.

Ooh, I can't wait to see the bout coming between Dante & Lady. Get ready to rumble!! Who's gonna fess up first? hehe

Keep it up, and update soon. Love it!

N.
darkraven1990
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseWow, another great chapter! I love this story it always makes me laugh, anyone in the same room as me when I read gives me really funny looks. I can't wait to see how much Dante and Lady argue while trying to sort out their differences, lol. I can really see Dante playing Loco Roco too.
Alexandritee
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseWoot!
Great chapter. I had to laugh at Rudra's question, though.
Keep writing!
pangpond
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseVergil send her more invitation! he's seduce Lady already!! lol and yeah..Dante & Lady is so stubborn,maybe Vergil plan is work,ok! what happen next? update soon please~
Kars
2008-09-02
ch 8,
abuseLOL! I died when you said "arrow to heaven"! It makes such perverted sense to me now. OMG. This chapter was friggin awesome. I love the side story with psycho girl Mary and her Vergil. Very morbid. >D This was so worth the wait! Thanks!
Mistress of Destruction
2008-08-03
ch 7, anon.
abuseSorry, a little lazy to sign in. But looky looky... I'm back!
I finally have a new computer! $10 well spent I think, but anyways I'm sure we'll talk more later. As for this chapter... it was pretty good. Though I would have liked to know more about what Lady found, but as you say... there is always next chapter. Maybe more Lady/Vergil interaction too?
Hope to talk to you again soon and can't wait for the next chapter!
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