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| Adorelo 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseMo, sweetie, I LOVE your writing. You just... get the characters, it's great! You need to get your butt over to the EC writing zone (and the Bones fandom, actually). If I remember correctly, you owe me one mistletoe fic :) Jodie x |
| fatkat 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseThat was so funny, thoroughly enjoyable. Had me laughing out loud! |
| Chelliyah 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abusehehe aww hun!! that was awesome!! i love it when u write! i nearly choked on my6 waffle when Danny and Flack screamed hehe !! XX |
| dutchtreat 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseMo! What a nice surprise to come home to...and what a funny and uplifting story to start off the weekend! - - Danny smirked as he wrapped an arm around her shoulders. She smiled up at him, the picture of innocence, "Well ya know what they say, ya can't beat the masters..." she coo'd sweetly. - - I loved that bit. We know Lindsay is not as innocent as she looks, and it's so funny that Danny is just wrapped around her finger and he doesn't even realize it. Oh and 'trick or treat?' I'd say (Dutch)treat! ;-) |
| Gaelen Kerr 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseNicely written my dear, quirky and fun, just like the Messers ought to be. Don't mind me, writing "the messers" is just so much easier to type than "Danny and Lindsay" and much more satisfying than "D/L". :) Loved it! |
| PintSizeGenius 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuselol! Loved it Mo! Absolutely hilarious! I can totally see Danny and Flack screaming like little girls over spiders! All I can say is, they better not come round to mine, or they'd be in for a shock as I own a tarantula! lol! Loved it, dude! Keep it up! PSG x |
| audaciousblonde 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseHow do I loathe this fic? Let me count the ways! Hm...Oh, I can't seem to find anything to loathe about it...hm. I guess that means I like it. ;) "He held her gaze for a second longer than necessary before one eyelid dropped in an audacious wink that never failed to send a delightful shiver down her back." You used 'audacious'. I wub you. How cute is this story? Such a unique and different approach to Halloween stories. I love that Lindsay is not the 'typical girl' about spiders. But poor Stella! I tend to be just like her when it comes to spiders. Arg!! 'Then of course there was the way he had woken her up this morning, feather soft kisses all over her face followed by his sexy as hell morning voice whispering in her ear "Trick or Treat Montana!" ' *Gutter* I love how you describe teh 'wet' kisses and 'sexy as hell' morning voice. I can see his voice being very deep and sensual. Arg again!! That's too good Mo!! The imagery! I love the way you put the reader right into the story. Your writing and stories are fluffy yet engrossing. And always very fun. :D Well Done, Fluffy T!! ~Aud~ |
| mercy4vr 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseI can so picture Flack running from Stella! This is great, Mo! Feels good to laugh! Hmm, ya know... Halloween is still 12 days away. That's plenty of time to write a second chapter, right? ;) *hint* |