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| von Rhettenstien 2008-04-09 ch 2,  | abuseWell it's an interesting story, but so many the titans are out of character. Robin has a napolean complex but he's not exactly a nagging jerk, all though it was funny reading him being prude with foul language, and raven never rarely smiles, she doesn't really betray any emotion. and i was shoked to see star allowed into ravens room and not in a bouncy happy mood. the story isn't bad, but the characters just need revised. hopefully in the futre. |
| von Rhettenstien 2008-04-04 ch 1, | abuseOk so this is a pretty wierd sounding story. but teen titans rules, and so does the thing. |
| MaxAlec4ever 2008-02-21 ch 11, | abuseWOW, real nice .. I hope it has a lot more horror and gore and death to come ;) |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 8, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 7, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 6, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 5, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 4, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 3, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me, just by breathing. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Sins of a Starcrafter 2008-02-18 ch 1, | abuseYou irritate the ** out of me. |
| Raven Morning 2008-02-11 ch 9, | abuseWow. That General White certainly seems a bit off, doesn't he? A few mood swings now and again? Hehehehe. Anyway, awesome chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Antarctica. I'm betting Robin will have some type of inner conflict whilst trying to resist killing Slade, right? Did I ever tell you that your descriptions are great? Seriously, spectacular stuff. |
| Raven Morning 2008-02-09 ch 6, | abuseGood chapter! It was short, but good. I liked all the band references, although it seemed kind of out of place, Are Starfire and Raven supposed to be together in this fic? Can't wait for more! |
| Jericho Pryce 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseIt's always pretty freakin' awesome to see my favorite writer back in da game. Keep it up, or I just might have to write a dedication to you in RoF. Oh wait... too late for that! Jericho |
| Raven Morning 2008-02-05 ch 5, | abuseI really enjoy reading your work. You give the Titans -Robin and Cyborg mainly- an edge that you wouldn't expect. Shame on them for advocating smoking! :D Can't wait for the next chapter to be up! |