M... Delicious. Instead of an "eye for and eye" you've got "a life for a life."

Huh. This was cute at the end, but for most of this, I was quite confused. I though Charlie was bringing a friend/another Charlie Bucket to the chocolate factory from school, and I didn't realize he was in the Gene Wilder world. Not sure how you could make it less confusing, though. ): Maybe I'm the only one confused anyhow.

Wha-?! No more chapters? Aw. That's so sad...sniff sniff. Great story, very intriguing.. he he..hope ya update soon!

You certainly do write fabulous 'dark' stories. :D Loved it.

Wow. I think this is the most original fic to bring both versions of Willy Wonka without making on stand out more than the other.

"Or maybe our Willy IS the mad man who succeeded in "replacing" his alter ego! Bwa-ha-hah-ha! Dun, dun, dun."

What a great closing line. XD a mystery that would never be solved!

Is this old or new? I never saw it before.