Hi

Wow I have to say that I loved your chapter as well as the story so far. I can’t wait to read the rest of the story

Violet44

well it would seem that you failed on getting everything up before your birthday, but i hope that you haven't abandoned it. i found what you have to be quite entertaining and would like to read more. please update!

okay that was diff

Excellent . . .

:D

I can SO see that. Wouldn't have thought any less of our dear Sevvy.

Oh. That made me laugh. Cute bit at the end.

Mm. I can't see him changing his wording from Miss Granger to Hermione, more the other way round, but interesting.

This is a very nice chapter that you have wrote. More please. :-)

Your chapters are amusing little glimpses. But a grey and black union suit doesn't work for me. That's too close to a movie's version of something Snape would wear in jail! And a miner's union suit - red wool! - doesn't fit him either. I will admit that he had a point when he said the union suit kept the Hogwarts lake safe for swimming!

Either way, I'm looking toward more blurbs. Such fun!

I loved that Hermione continues to call him 'sir' when he is teaching! he he so cute! I can't wait to see him propose? *squeaks*

I am awed at all of the research you have put into this, so kudos just for that my dear :)

I hope everything is better today x

Aw how sweet...I love that he was being cunning and cloak-and-dagger about it, but we all know hermione was aware of his intentions-hence plopping him back in square one.

This was gorgeous, and my best wishes to you and your mom.

Paddy

HM SO he is going to make a ring is he

can we say marriage perhaps

bren

This was also great!! I can't believe that I am enjoying a SS/HG fic, which I never thought I would (I'm just way too devoted to Lily).

Please draw me a picture of Sev in a Union Suit *begs on knees* I will do ANYTHING :)

- Fray xx

Dizi this was so well done (and hilarious)! You have managed to create such a good storyline out of such a strange prompt, I would have been throughly lost.

Congrats xx

Thank you for writing this very interesting chapter. Can we have more please, if that is possible. Have a good day tomorrow. :-)