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poxmaker
2008-09-20
ch 1,
abuseWell that was interesting. I don't think I've ever read a fic from Jason's POV before. Actually... I don't think I've even ever read a fic ABOUT Jason before. XD I guess that made it better.

I totally adored the 'chaise' scene. Not only is the thought of Chad doing Yoga hilarious, the image of Ryan and Chad cuddling is adorable. Hence why I "adored" the scene. XD

The one thing that I had a little trouble with, though, was your use of parentheses. The info inside them tended to be... lengthy. Although I found that information interesting... it's just that sometimes I got confused as to what had been said in the original sentence and had to look back. Of course, I can't think of any way to change it, so I don't know why I'm complaining. XD So just ignore that...

The fic was very well written, and I enjoyed reading it. Just what I needed for a creativity boost to try and write my own Chyan. Thanks! ^^
WickedWitchoftheSE
2008-08-20
ch 1,
abuseaw, that was so adorable! I love it when Jason figures something out...
hopecraycat
2008-07-10
ch 1,
abuseAw! I've never really thought about Jason much before, but you made me totally love him with this story. I love how he's so happy to have actually figured something out on his own, and how he totally worships Martha, and just...aw! I just want to hug him! I also really like how you described Chad's utter happiness over Ryan. So cute! Oh, and the bit about all the Wildcats secretely wanting to be spies made me crack up. It toally has to be true. ;) So yeah, this was a great unique perspective and totally adorable. Well done!
firedragongirl
2008-06-15
ch 1,
abuseYes! Jason finally gets a big part in a fanfiction! This was just wonderful! Especially since during the whole movies, Jason really didn't get to play all that big a role unlike Troy, Chad, and Zeke, so this was just really great! ^.^ And the way that his mind works... it's just cool! And like, did no one really notice that Chad and Ryan switched clothing? Because Gabi commented on "Chad's" hat after the game. XDXD But like, yeah, this was just really awesome. ^.^ Please type like this soon! ^.^
Tidus'luvr
2008-02-01
ch 1,
abuseoh my god this was fantastic. like it really was, i liked how it was written from jason's POV and you had a ton of character dev. and enough of the plot with in that to keep it moving. i bow down to you:D
Emma
2008-01-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh, wow - that was really cute! Wonderful, adorable story. :)
FrogsofChocolate
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseAW! That was so beyond cute! I love Jason! *grins* (I'm glad you didn't have him with Kelsi- I think he fits better with Martha too)
endiahna
2007-12-16
ch 1,
abuseThat was so cute! I liked it alot! I liked how we got to see inside of Jason's mind, and hes not such a bad guy.
Sashan
2007-12-02
ch 1,
abuseWonderful story! Not only did you give Jason a personality, it was a believable one, that was original! I loved reading this from his point of view and was geniunely rooting him on. The Chad/Ryan in this was adorable and I loved the touching while speaking and all the smiling. Excellent job!
I Am The Bunny Slayer
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseThat was so freakin adorable.
Old Fiat
2007-10-29
ch 1,
abuseFabulous!! This has to be the best... Well... Um... Thing... like... yeah...

o.o

Anyway! (I ran out of words.)

I love it! I just-- yeah. It's awesome. Fabulhaft. Absolut fabulhaft. (I have no idea if that's spelled right. It's German for Absolutely fabulous. No, I'm not German (though I have a lot of German genetic material), but I watched a video of 'Fabulous' with German subtitles on YouTube.

Wonderful. I'm favoriting!

-Old Fiat
Witty-Kate
2007-10-24
ch 1,
abusewowowowow
Kenya Bloodstone
2007-10-23
ch 1,
abuseThis story was so much fun to read as well. I loved it and I loved that Jason wasn't made to be the evil bad guy. lol. KUDOS on another wonderful story. You are an amazing Author.
Abster1
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseLOL! This story is hilarious... :D And full of Chyan goodness! Sorry... it just is. There were a lot of run-on rambling stuff in here, and occasionally it was hard to follow - but other than that it was really good - and I like your pairings. :D

-Abz
S.H.Nina
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseAww that was so cute!
I love Jason. =3
And the scene by the pool was just too adorable. I nearly died.
Another story to add to my favorites list...
:]
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