Just re-read this story again...and love it! You should really add to this...it could go along way! :)

Wow, I know what you're beta meant about feeling sorry for Mann.

This was extremly well written. Cheers A

Very good start, I'd like to know if you have a follow up? (BLUSHING) i have a craving for a Hollis Hater story and yours seemed to be strolling along nicely. I'd love to see where you take it. I've been looking and looking for a really teeth griting story where Gibbs chooses Abby over Hollis and Hollis makes a big stink about it forcing team Gibbs (abbyandgibbs) to be not so nice. What would Hollis do? Would she just walk away or fight to try to keep him? MEFIGHT he's hot.

cute

Oh, this is totally going in my favs. Not only did you NOT write a Mann!bashing fic, but you conveyed SO much with so little...even though the action itself is just HUGE. LOVE LOVE LOVE everything that's implied here. Whether Gabby is romantic or just friends in this particular story, it doesn't matter, because of COURSE Gibbs would think this way no matter what. ::happy sigh:: PERFECT.

Oh. I really liked this. I like how you played around with the concept of Gibbs' door being locked. Well thought out and written.

"Abby won't mind you being here."

Perfect. Absolutely perfect.

Didn't feel bad for Mann, but I loved this story! :D It was really good and showed just how much Gibbs cares for her. Awesome. :D

Wow! What a beautiful fic! Spot-on characterization, correct grammar, K rated,and shows the Gabby relationship in a nutshell. Fanfic masterpiece.

Wonderful work!

Great story base, as well!

I love the ending, where Hollis hears the deadbolt being turned! :)

Great job!

I absolutely love this story. Simply brilliant!

well that would be the only reason he locked it. good fic.

Aw lovely!

I like this story I really wish there was another chapter where Gibbs and Abby get together and Mann hits the road. Sheesh no one wants to be around her can't she get the hint.

Gah. write another one.

Wow. I have only recently gotten into NCIS and I haven't seen the first... what four seasons? Is this the 5th or 4th? I just watched the season finale and the season premire. I have seen some of the reruns, and I know who Mann is. I love that you were able to do this. I haven't come across something like this yet; and I have to say that I think that you captured the relationship between Abby and Gibbs perfectly. Not to mention that the...animosity between Abby and Mann does come across as a temperature drop. I love that the shock of what Abby means to Gibbs shocks Mann. I don't know why it would, but, I think she's kinda slow. I loved the story. Thank you for writing it.