Bobby is going to bargin. Lucy gets to live if she free's Dean and leaves the book out of it.

Such short chapture. Is it a ritual or by means of barter that Dean ca be saved?

That was a shorty but action packed. We're getting to the real meat. Something I'd like to know is how Lucy rates a goodguy and badguy statuse? Next chapture right?

So not being able to do the loyalty requist because Lucy is demanding he kill a family member is the key to freeing Dean is it? Lucy is violating the contract thus making it void? How close am I?

I thought Lucy didn't deal in souls and as such why make an exseption for a twelve year old boy. This doesn't make sence and is disturbing.

If Sam's Ruby's knew boss than what Azazel once owned Sam now owns which includes Dean's soul. Very clever. This I got to see. And soon I hope.

Complex, tricky to follow so tisty and turny. LOVE IT.

MORE please and soon, oh but I hope Bela is apropreatly nasty.

Some try to give her a kind edge and even pair her with Dean. That not only triggers my ew responce but destroys any fun that is Bela who makes you want club her with a bat. Isn't that what she's suposed to be?

Your writing style is addictive, as it was with your previous stories, however breaking the deal does not hold much appeal for me and I find it hard to continue reading this story. It might have something to do with the fact that Season 2 has not even started, let alone season 3!

Yay! Can't wait!