Sweet but very sad story. Good work.

Very sentimental, I must say, and I enjoyed every word. I must agree with Knights Templar in saying that this piece did touch on an aspect of Macross that we rarely talk about, adn I am glad to see you touch upon it with a sensative pen stroke. Kudos.

Very nice, I enjoyed your story, and not to mention the premise. This is an aspect of the story that not many touch upon. Very nicely done, I look forward to your next work with joy and anticipation.