That was terrible. Not in a writing way but that plot was terrible and the ending was terrible. I didn't spend two hours of my life for them not to get together. Wtf

this is awesome so continue it please

Wow, verrry nice! You truly opened a whole other door of emotions between the two, I don't think I'll be able to read Furuba the same way again :P

I loved how you went from diary to prose, you made it feel more personal between the two characters, and I also loved the way you emphasised how much the two needed Tohru - but at the same time, at school they really seemed like average teenagers. However, I did think Yuuki was a little too forward in what he wanted, and maybe a little more subtlety would be better?

Also loving the Harry Potter reference, I'm a big fan!

The ending was truly amazing - I actually breathed a massive WOW when I read it. It made me think - does Yuuki's affection for Kyo really influence their lives so much? Then again, Kyo mentions that he loves Tohru... It's confusing and intriguing at the same time. It is quite unrealistic that Yuuki and Kyo would love eachother for so long, but of course, that is of no importance :P

Truly inspiring - that such a lighthearted anime could be turned into suck a dark, deep and meaningful story is truly amazing. Big claps! :P

I really like the story now that I have finished it *

Hi Real Good story still not finished reading...

this is probably the coolest Furuba fic EVER! Good job!

that last kyo part was amazing for some reason... lol sigh. i liked it. that is putting it lightly *LARGE SMILE* yea...

*sniffle* That ending was so sweet; not too much angst. I still wish they could've been together, though.

This is really good! You must continue! YOU MUST!

So it's over? *cries* Seriously though, this makes me so sad. I stopped reading Fruits Basket at 17 because I am just so heartbroken that it's ending and I feel like everyone is going to go their separate ways. I loved the Yuki/Kyo parts while they lasted.

It was awesome. o_o;

I never expected a KyouxYuki fanfic to be so... good. o_O;

Great job! I loved it!

I like how you tied in the manga plot too. C:

this was a bit of a sad ending. but it was a good story.

wow...this was an amazing chapter. I loved kyo's last line. so sad, but sweet. :D

This was really interesting. I love the turn of events you took. The writing style was different and easy to follow. Are you going to write more? Is Yuki finally going to conquer the challenge that is Kyo? I'm dying for answers!

Aww. I really like how you ended the chapter with the whole banquet thing. Really really good :] Keep up the good work and update soon, I'll surely be waiting.