O my goodness! That was beautiful! I like how it was simple but still had some depth to it.

Remember your promise, you did say that she would end up with Edward!

Wow, JoonBug - you are a very good writer. I don't know how you juggle so many stories at one time and keep them updated. I'm enjoying all of your stories.

WOW! I was totally not expecting that! This is a very good story. Update soon, please!

That was um...mature as in quite steamy! Not that I'm complaining. So, is she going to turn into a Vampire because she has Edwards "love" inside of her body? I was thinking that she would get changed with sex maybe in the 4th book (with it not being a "bite") so it wouldn't break the treaty.

LMAO lock your window? Let's go out on a sunny day? Oh, Jake can really be cruel to poor Edward...I love it!

Wow! Great story so far! I love that Bella is afraid of him! She really should be in that past memory.

oh god oh God she can't die you wouldn't let her oh please please don't let her die I can't take that please don't let her die. You are beyond evil to leave us with that cliffie UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE LIKE NOW!

oh. my. gosh! that was totally unexpected! but she'll be alright right? i hope she is! it was great though!

/becca/

OMG OMG OMG OMG!

Wow! Poor Bella, she really is a danger magnet. I'm looking forward to your updates.

You know what i think that was good chapter even though Edward was out of charectar. But i do wonder what will happen next?

omigsh! please tell me before i go on! will she remember Edward? i can't bear to read on if she won't! i won't continue until you reply!

wow great story! can't wait till u update!

great story

Bella is such a skanky bitch! She knows that she's engaged to Edward but she kissed Jacob! What the f*ck!