 G.U.3.S.S. 2009-05-28 . chapter 9Your story intrigues me. Could it be that the Nephilim" is perhaps, Cassandra? |
 Mithral Rose 2009-03-29 . chapter 1Lol. I Love the picture of Sparda holding the twins. The Legendary Sparda freaked out! (I say freaked out because if it's bad enough to show nevousness on the outside he's probably freaking out on the inside!) Lol! I like it so far! |
 zenbon zakura 2009-03-26 . chapter 9O.o
OMG
this is awesome!! i found another golden story!
hurry update!!
lol vergil sets people on fire with a slight glance lol |
 ninjaeris13 2009-03-25 . chapter 9I love everything you write Eric, your a comic genius!! I had to look up the Forest guy and believe it or not, I thought Leon was the Leon from Final Fantasy... yeah really stupid but I digress... I love it!!
PS - Did you ever find your notebook? |
 Shadow'sIllusionist 2009-03-25 . chapter 9Yay, an update! A dark and mysterious demons appears! The changed in the storyline is really interesting. I hope you update again very soon, I'm not good with cliffhangers >_< I want to see what happens! Nice job as always. |
 Ranchdressing 2009-03-25 . chapter 9I like how the chapter starts off in present time with Dante getting duped by everyone! Poor guy can never get his own beer, huh?
The rest of the chapter was good! But I really liked the ending. Esp. the X-Files theme part. I was actually hmm-ing that theme during the end. |
 Phant0m 2009-03-25 . chapter 9You must be good at paintball - judging by all the stories you inserted it into. I've always wanted to try it but never had a chance (or I'm just making excuses for being lazy)).
Their tactics were well-written - almost like playing a game - you know, your volunteering seems pretty-grounded now-)
Thank you for another nice chapter! |
 Shadow-of-a-Wolf 2009-03-25 . chapter 9Ah the legend of the blue clad boogeyman continues to grow. And someone's enjoying sudden twists so much I see , m.night has competition. |
 Mariposa-Princessa 2009-03-25 . chapter 9nice. dannte gets up for a drink and ends up with less than he expected XD. nice twist in the story too, having then twins get attacked right in the middle of the paintball match.
it was so funny when chris ran into vergil, i thought he was going to pee his pants XD!!
next up, battle of the titans, Devil Twin style! :) |
 Ulquiorra 2008-12-01 . chapter 4 It was sad... truly indeed. Sparda sacrifised himself for the sake of the human world because he gained something that not all devil can achieve, love. |
 Mariposa-Princessa 2008-11-11 . chapter 8all i can say is keep doing what your doing cuz its working. cant wait for the next chapter. i hope vergil kicks dante's butt! |
 Satanic Park Of Madness 2008-11-09 . chapter 8Where did the line “GENTLEMEN BEHOLD! come from. The reason I ask is becuase I heard it on a youtube video seires called Evangelion outakes. Usually I'm against autors who insert themselves into the story but you did it in a comical manner and it never felt liek you were interuptting the story and killing the mood. I take it Lady and Trish are aginst you huh? Lulu,Kurenai and samus stopped calling me after I cheated of them.
Aww nothing like a good game of paintball. Can't say that I have played it much to my dismay.
This chapter has been awarded for most comcial one and all those references you threw. I certainly enjoyed reading this. Please do some more funny chapters in the future regarding the twins. Oh and before I sign off trish and Lady wanted me to ask you when you will do a chapter for them. Thanks for the chuckles. |
 DirtyVelvet 2008-11-03 . chapter 8This has to be my favorite chapter so far. Vergil mimicking Dante, Leon who is "handy with a gun for some odd reason." Dante constantly paintballing poor Leon. Oh, this was fantastic. I really did laugh at my computer. Haha. Nice job!
~DV~ |
 Grimmjow J. the 6th Espada 2008-10-30 . chapter 8Great Chapter!! I can't wait for the next one!
~Grimmy |
 Ranchdressing 2008-10-30 . chapter 8Well at least Dante succeded in bringing Vergil back to life. Although I'm sure he kinda wishes they weren't twins right now, huh? XD |