totally awesome! I love the story. Please don't stop.

Great story. Can't wait to read more.

You have a really good story. I love the way you make this sidenotes to canon and hope you can continue with this tale

Hey great story so far. I can't wait to see what you do with the stroy next. Keep up the great work and please hurry up with the next chapter.

Wow! Awesome. We got to see what Dawn was thinking through out the whole situation. It was happy and then it turned sad. I hope everything works out good. I also hope we get to see what Faith is thinking. Please update soon. I am just too excited to see what happens next that words can't even tell you. :)

Sincerely,

dancer

WOw!! Thiz waz a pretty powerful chap. Totally luved it. Cant wait 4 the next chapters!! Plz update soon!

Wow! Very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to see what happens next.

Thanks

Very cute ending. Can't wait until the next update.

Oh my it waz updated!! Finally! Luved the chapter 2!! I luv how Faith an Dawn interatct!! PLz update soon!

I think I like this in the first person better. Great story either way. Can't wait for more.

I think that Dawn should really figure out what she really wants *coughFaithcough*. And then she should talk to Faith. Really talk to her. Not try to fight her off.
Besides, if Buffy caught them two doing something, she would totally not ignore Dawn anymore XD

great update can't wait to read more of this fic something

soo can they like hear each other's thoughts!??! I really like this!! The flashbacks r awesome!! PLz update soon!

very good start! update soon

This story is very well written and the pairing intrigues me. Please write more.