Interesting.

C.D.

^_^ COOL!! Is there a sequal?

D'aww.

Another series featuring Pursuit and Prowl? Yay!

perfect way to end the fic. good job. hope you have a new fic out soon.

Wonderful right down to the end! I'll be looking for your other work for sure =)

Heehee, they are so cute! Me likie. Please update soon! :).
Optimus and Bumblebee: Cya later! :) to :D.

They're quite readable OCs and well written - it does seem a little odd for Persuit to be so traumatised by the medics though might be worth giving more of an explanation - especially since anyone that bad a medic wouldn't be in a main cities medic centre.

But it is a good story so far and I can't wait to see her reaction :)

their making harder then it seems. but its fun watching them make fools of themselves. that was such a sweet moment. keep up the good work. hope the next chapter will be coming up soon.

Sweet! So, what do you get when you mix a panda car with a jet? Might be interesting =) More please?!!

XD I can just see that "BUAH?!" look on Pursuit's face at the end.

*Cracks up* I love this story! ^_^ Is Prowl gonna be in it?

O_O More please!

Aw. This story is so sweet. The pairing's cute and your writing is fantastic. Keep up the great work.

Very sweet! I love how you write for these two =) More soon I hope!

:3 De-nial! Not just a river in Egypt.