Bonjour
it is me
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I read this on SV website at school-the only one that isn't blocked- and by the end of the class i had about three people sitting around me reading it along. We eventually just had to read it out loud. Teacher wasn't in the room Lol
Anyway love you guys

I knew they were sirens the moment you described the house ;)
Still don't get why you chose greek names, but ok.
It was a good story.

good ending. dean's back to his old self and the bad guys dead. liked the added touch with the phone and the relationship between john and dean, poor bloke! at least he has caleb!
i enjoyed this story, well done and i look forward to reading your next one!
all the best
dudeedaisy x

hey, sorry have been crap with reveiws since i started me new job ! i am just fitting in reading the chapters so i hope you dont mind the lack of reveiws !

i think its been a great story rather weird and hard to imagine but great at the same time !

oh and the him too about jim was to funny for words it had me cracked up ! which is a very good thing as i have just finshed reading ridleys story which had my cryin lol !

okay i dont know when i will be able to reply again but i will be reading and you write !

bye for now !

Wonderful fic. Sorry for not reviewing before now. I love the Caleb/Dean relationship. Such a wonderful dynamic to have Dean as the younger brother under protection for a change. I love Sam/Dean - but there is just something about Dean and Caleb that is such a pleasure to read.

You write them well and it was great to see Pastor Jim show up to help. I have serious John issues with the Brotherhood AU - but that's my problem, not yours :) He is how he is I guess. I prefer my John a little softer, not much, just a little. It's almost painful to read his interactions with Dean sometimes. But I digress :D

Looking forward to your Christmas fic.

--shan

Great chapter! Nice conclusion. Will be looking for your next fic as I'm sure it's in the works! :)

great last chapter. i always love seeing jim in action. i really enjoyed reading this. i'm looking forward to your holiday fic!

Loved the ending. The way Jim came up with the plan. Dean and Caleb interplay was funny. The description of John distancing himself from Dean was heartbreaking. Thanks for the story.

Great chapter and story! I laughed out loud when Jason thought Jim had been with a siren too. Jim talking about his next sermon was cute too. Nice ending, also.

Great ending!
I like it when Dean return to his normal self and say that he's more handsome! I don't know how it could be possible...

This was exceptionally enjoyable -- as always! Love the byplay between the Brotherhood Caleb and Dean as much as the real stuff between Dean and Sam. And it was great to get a glimpse of 007 Jim. Thanks for a rousing adventure!

Sue

another great chapter and an excellent story, thanks ^^

Friggen John Winchester i swear... i wanna strangle him as much as i want to hug him...argh frustrating. ok this is when i need to remind myself they they are fictional characters and not real people...*deep breath* ok im all better now sorry bout that. Another great story T and I can't wait for your christmas story. Thanks for letting us see Jim in action again...makes me happy!! ttyl~ m

Hey. I absolutely loved that ending ;) Jim at work ... that was excellent.

I think I laughed out loud when Jason asked them if Jim was a victim too lmao and Dean's response that he was always this old was even funnier hehe

Seeing Jim in action is always thrilling. I love it! and Caleb's top 40 crap :P lmao

The whole thing ended nicely although a bit sad because of John ... i love the man dearly but god he could be an absolute prick sometimes

Great job, my friend :)

Tara x0x

This story was great!
I loved the ending how they made sure to get Dean to go with them, it matches well with the fic where he got hurt by the tinkerbox, that coupled with Sam leaving might be one of the things that drove John to separate himself a little from Dean, he could see how much he had harmed him with what he had done!

It was a superb story and Jim's presence made it even more fun! I love how the boys admire him, and how the other guy though he had been taken in as well!
He has always been this old was a great line!
I am looking forward to reading your holiday fic!
BTW Happy holidays for you!