I'm not sure which I love more, the story or this one-shot.

Sasuke thinking of her just seems pretty cute to me **

Sasuke is suppose to be so emotionless and him doing things similiar to this is why my son hates him, but I really think you have to step back and look at what he's been through, thanks for the realistic insight. This is one of the reason's I think he and Hinata would make a good couple, He needs someone who will love him and she needs someone to protect and encourage her, she knows how to deal with quiet men who aren't all mushy, and he wants a family...they make a very good match.

I particularly liked ' Beautiful Lie ' and ' Doll Parts '.
Beautiful Lie because .. well we all love Sasuke ;]
And Doll Parts because even though I love Neji, in this I both hated AND loved him. The same with Hanabi. I felt like they both got what they deserved but at the same time they were victims.
Anyways;
Brilliant work!

WOHOO~!
Great job. I loved it!! *swoons over fic*

Keep up the awesome - SasuHina - work!

Your SASUHINA fan,
~!Saku-chan!~

okay this amde me sad, but it made me glad I read Beautiful Lies before this. Poor Sasuke-kun he amde me want to kill that Micheal jacson wannabe...well I want to anyway (glad he dies.)

aww ... what's cool is that this whole Beautiful Lie story is believable ... like if naruto goes with sakura (even if she is a **) and hinata with sasuke ... ahh sasuhina .. so perfect =D

this is quite a emotional one shot
it was v entertaining to read :D
the song matches the fic quite well :)

dat sick orochimaru bastard! make him do someit like dat! somehow i doubt that sasuke wud actually kill the little boy but hey who knows?

Sasuke is supposed to have a lot of hate at least until Itachi is dead.

oh angsty sasuke thinking of pretty hinata! love it! thank you for making a sasuhina fic!

kool story, update soon

good job! I like the song too. You described Sasuke's emotions very well in this! XD

wow...that's quite a pre-quel! It makes his reactions to her in Beautiful Lie so much richer. :)

0_O woah this was amazing i was like 0_O what just happened. that was so cute sasuke was thinking of hinata on her birthday, is that really her birthday 0_O that will be cool ^^-azar

heh... sorry it took me so long to finally leave a review here. Dude... you better continue this. i love it! your stories are very in character and i really enjoy reading them. i think this chapter was awesome, and like your other story, left me wanting more. so plz update soon. well yeah bye bye!

i loved this!! so well written, and sasuke was so perfectly characterized:)