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| I-love-deidara-4eva 2008-08-11 ch 1,  | abuseWOW! What a load of Crap! jokes it was okay i guess |
| DanniV 2008-06-12 ch 3, | abusei like the idea please please keep up the story and update soon. |
| Novus Disputato 2008-06-12 ch 3, | abusePerhaps you've not checked the rules; perhaps you're just a moron. This does not qualify as a chapter. (For that matter, neither do the first two. You are a most incompetent writer.) |
| Effy 2008-06-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh wow. How mature. You're 13 trying to write a story for those aged 16+. Grow up kiddo. |
| Sirrius's Sister 2008-06-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseHey, i didn't feel like logging in. ;) If you need a beta, i'd be glad to do it. I like this story and would like to see more |
| Slytherin Princess 7 2008-06-12 ch 3, | abuseI'm srry but Mr. Cool's review is bogus! I mean yeah u do have some graphical errors in ur story, but everybody has them in one way or another! I only agree w/ 1 thing...u could make ur chapters longer. I hope that u'll make it through the slander and update soon! Your Friendly Neiborhood Writer, SP7 |
| Mr Cool 2008-06-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseWORST STORY IV EVER READ. U should stop righting stories or get some lessons There's no need to say anything else. |
| Slytherin Princess 7 2008-06-04 ch 2, | abuseNice plot. You like to b mean to Hermione, though, don't you? Anyway, hope you pick up on this story again.. Your Friendly Neiborhood Writer, SP7 |
| Sarah 2008-04-10 ch 2, anon. | abusehi, it´s intersting, but maybe you could write a bit more...? it´s everytime a bit short...^^ |
| Eva 2008-01-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseI think your story has potential, but you'll definitely need to improve your writing and make longer chapters! Looking forward to the next update, though. |
| hplvrgurl132 2008-01-14 ch 2, | abusecan't wait to see what happens next. |
| shay-piratess 2007-12-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseNice beginning, but then it spiraled downhill from there. *sigh* I can see why no one reviewed your other story, not to be mean! Your writing is, frankly, not the best. Ch. 1 was abruptly cut off and had me thinking, "what the hell?" Please learn to end a chapter correctly and not abruptly cut it off! ¥ Shay-Piratess |
| hplvrgurl132 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThat first chapter threw me off a little, is this a oneshot or are you continuing? |
| A.White.Rose 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseInteresting beginning , I can't wait to see how the story develops. Looking forward to the next update! A.White.Rose |
| Sirrius's Sister 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseIntresting concept. Can't wait to find out more |