The last few lines of this chapter are purely amazing I can't describe how powerful the feelings you wrote for Brooke and Lucas here are.
"Would mark the end of her ability to love another human being."
Wow!
I liked how you included Lindsay in this chapter as well

please make more of that it is so good

Awe I love brookes new SL I cant wait to see where it ends :) And Brucas is amazing as always along with Nathan :) I love him, here :)
Update soon ;)

Love this story.
I cant wait to read more.
Hope brooke's father stop being an ** soon. He never cared for her before why now.

This was such a great chapter. And this story is definitely worth sticking around for. I can't wait to read the rest!

Ok, I LOVE you for updating this story! I first starting reading it awhile ago, and I was surprised to see it being updated! Anyways, the chapter is really good, lots of drama. Hoping that we get more Naley in, but everything's great. Update soon!

Yeah, finally an update, and a amazing one at that :D Brooke's farther is an idiot, I loved that Lucas stood up for Brooke in the end, go Lucas :)

Good job. Excellent chapter, I'm very surprised by where you are taking this. I love it though and I can't wait to see the triumph that everyone goes through even if its in death or in life. You've still got it!

please please update soner this time i love it

great chapter.. X

oh i like please update soon

O no poor brooke and luke.
They need to be able to see each other. Her father is taking things a bit far. Yeah she let things go, droped things let gradfes slip. But she young in love and her bf is very sick. But if she does better she should be able to see him. i hope so at least.

Haley really needs help to. Her family is falling apart.

I hope the dr luke talked to can help.

I'm loving Naley in this story, and the suspense is killing me!! lol
Please update asap!! :D:D

i miss this story, it's been too long since the last update.
Hope you'll update soon, i love it.

Seriously, I'm like addicted to every story, you have written. The ideas are just so good, and you are a very good writer. This story is just so sad, everyone is such a mess, but still you just love them. I really like Dean, and please do not let him die. ;( I'll be waiting patiently for an another update :)