_ WOOT! thats awsome! :P you rock my socks and the ending is fine!

AH!

twilight-just read new moon (waiting for eclipse to come...) and arent they just some of the best books E.V.E.R?

bella and edward-he said yes! they are married! she will be a vampire! wow.

excellent!-really amazing for only your 2nd fic (thats right, isnt it?) and i am now probably gonna spend around 2ish hours looking at vampire fics. wohhoo

WELL DONE! :)

it was okay, just don't keep repeating words and make sure you get edward's dialouge right. remember he is old fashioned so dont make him do something he would not usually do.

Wow that was really good. I really didn't think it was that out of character, if you ask me! Anyways nicely done.

love im in love

it kinda felt a little rushed, but very sweet nonetheless. good job :)

Very good! I'd love it if you wrote some more - about during the change, Edward's side to the story, after the change etc etc!

:)

It's good you could definatly add more to and I hope you do.