this was really good! i loved the ending.

tat was really sweet! I just don't get why at the beginning of chapter two Fang was acting different then he had in chpater one.

aw, how happy & yet sad! =) nice one. :)

omgosh awsome i love this chap too! i hope youll write more!*bambi eyes*

so awsome! i love it! it was sweet!

Very well writen work, wings. I just made an account today. Well, good work and keep it up.
~Riku~

Aw, that was a prettaay cute ending. Definatly worth the wait, not to detailed to make everything boring and obvios, and not to choppy that were left in the dark. WOO. Amazing writer!

Happy Holidays

Cute. I liked it. Good work.
-Flare

update soon plz

Blood shall pour openly from your hearth and spittle shall spew from your deceasing veins. Now tell me what your story was aiming at?

WOW I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER COMES OUT

you better be sorry girl.
UPDATE AND YOU WILL BE REDEEMED!!
FreexFlyer

aw so cute! continue!

:D

Please post more!
It´s great! I love it so far!

please continue!!
it was REALLY good! i could read this all night!