Wow, that was wonderful! Beautifully written. i don't think I've read a P/T like this before. I thought the story was unique and the emotions so real. I love how both recognised that things between them would change. I only wish their reunion scene was slightly longer. If I were B'Elanna, I think I would have hugged him without being able to let go for possibly hours, whilst crying, and then dealing with all the emotional stuff afterwards. Anyway, good job!

It took me a couple hours to finish, but it was totally worth it! I

love this story!

This was really great - but a rather ong read. Maybe it would have been better split into chapters.

Wow. This is powerful and well-written. I especially liked the lines about "they just plain never thought." Nice piece!

Hey, I couldn't shut it down! This is a great story! I hope you will write other stories like this in the future, if you haven't already.

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wow. intense story.

WOW!

What an Awesome Fanfic! you're great at this! and what a twist. this story gets a ten outa ten! keep it up!

I LOVED IT! I was about to cry in some parts too. Loved all of it. :)

ooh that was soooooooooooooooo good!

Good story. Great idea. Believable charactors. 'nuff said!

That was good, and I thought the voyager series was over if one of the writers saw that they would probably want to buy it off you. Long though took me a while to read it. You should try becoming a writer and think up some of your own charecters I haven't wrote anyhting on this site yet but I might soon...

Wow! That was great!

nice