|Reviews for My Better Half|
| Colton M. H 1/5/08 . chapter 6
Good job! I love the end of it, makes the whole idea of death so much better than alot of people do, just like how it was in Harry Potter, but the fact they went to a Quidditch Pitch was cool.
It was really sad in the beginning, but I like how it slowly changed the pace.
Oh, and there was a typo in it, I forgot where, but it was with two words I remember. It was like something and is, but the i was in the word before it.
Anyways, great job! Sorry I wasn't able to have as long as a review as I did with Iris over at Yes, I'm the same person there.
| DarkAngel814 11/11/07 . chapter 6
that was really good I really enjoyed reading this story it was very sweet good job you did a good job writing it
| authoroftherose 11/11/07 . chapter 6
*clap clap clap* Bravo bravo well done.!:)
| DarkAngel814 10/24/07 . chapter 5
Aww is that it well it was really good yay!
| misslindseyleeweasley 10/22/07 . chapter 5
this makes me sad but i
| VioletStrawberries 10/22/07 . chapter 5
Is that the end?
I loved this story so much. I'm glad you actually had him use the stone at the end for a proper goodbye. That almost made me cry.
| DarkAngel814 10/21/07 . chapter 4
this story is so sad I'm so angry that fred and tonks and lupin died! its not fair this is a good story but really sad
| VioletStrawberries 10/21/07 . chapter 3
Yes, you wrote more!
I'm starting to think that the shortness of the chapters is what makes the story so good. It makes me want to read on. Update soon please!
| DarkAngel814 10/21/07 . chapter 3
that was a good job update soon.
| DarkAngel814 10/21/07 . chapter 2
omg I'm gonna cry its good
| DarkAngel814 10/21/07 . chapter 1
omg that was so sad I hated that fred died
| XxAssenaxX 10/20/07 . chapter 1
Thanks so much, guys! I didn't expect any reviews at all. I'll try to update it if I think of something, or start another story.
| skatergirl13 10/20/07 . chapter 1
I liked this. Very well written. Gotta feel sorry for George, man...
I like this a lot, 5 stars.
| VioletStrawberries 10/20/07 . chapter 1
That was so sad!
It was way too short though. You should write more.
| Love Of Blood 10/20/07 . chapter 1
(while crying, says)RIP, FRED RIP!