 Steeple333 10/24/07 . chapter 1Endrance intimidators... wouldn't they be with En, then, trying to psyche him out? Or perhaps 'twas a typo... ;
Y'know, reading this lit the fire under my ass to finally draw Skeith in a more humanoid form. [dashes off] |
 Akumarayne 10/21/07 . chapter 1*Squeals* Aw, poor Skeith misses his Haseo.
And I should hit you for ending it there! Augh. I cant wait for the next chapter!
I love how you implied the Corbenik/Ovan in it. Also the idea of Haseo going away for a while and coming back was good!
...and how Skeith only cries for Haseo. (I know he wouldnt find another user, but I think the thought of this might make Haseo secretly jealous)
And the last part, where Haseo asks to kiss Skeith, that was so cute! Ah, better stop before this review gets too long! |