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imanokie01
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseReally funny and really cute. Nice job. :)
Steffi
2007-11-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love it!
Ellae
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuseHaha!

Really funneh and cute as well.

Still, it's kind of not quite up to par in terms of spelling and grammar (five bets to one- you don't have a beta?).
You should take time to look it over for tiny errors, or get a friend to beta it for you.

Most prominent mistake was "censure". I think you meant "censor"?


Good luck, hope to see it uploaded again,
Ellae.


"“Then you shouldn’t have tried to peek under my skirt.”
Lenneko-chan
2007-10-22
ch 1,
abuseAw (sniff, sniff). I really don't know what to say. Thank you so much!^^
Anne/Catty/Caith/Lenneko-chan/whatever you want to call me^^
Astra 12
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abuseSuper! Grappig, erg leuk m te lezen.

Van mij mag je meer Draco/HErmione schrijven!
lovestoned16
2007-10-21
ch 1,
abusecute. ! very cute. :D
crazyshrezi
2007-10-20
ch 1,
abuseAmazing.
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