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Thank you for updating. ;o;
I love this chapter just as much as I've loved all the others. Dammit, I'm 11days behind, I wish I could get tweets for this. I'd actually make a twitter if I could get tweets for this.
/hates twitter/
Or some kind of alert update system. Blargh.
Steven and Wallace are so adorable in this bit, love the twist with the foot-fetish man! I have a friend who chews on her toenails, so it wouldn't wholly surprise me that this fetish is out there. Only, that they would pay top dollar to do it. xD
Will's whole predicament is really starting to fascinate me, and I'm going to explode like a thousand suns if we don't learn more about Erika soon. Thanks for mentioning their pokemon through this, a nice touch. Please update sooner next time! We love you <3

finally Finally FINALLY an update ^O^
*just noticed that I spelt Originshipping wrong in my previous comment xD

WOW DIS CRAP WAS SO CRAPPY I CRAPPED CRAP OUT MY CRAP HOLE

Are you continuing this? Are you? ;__; I wanna read more.
Hopefully you'll take a break from Zhampy and come back here >__

Well, that was a good story, though I worry about Erika having been kidnapped... I think I'd prefer Lance X Ash and Lorelei with someone else...

update! please!
and more originalshipping?
TT^TT

I'm really glad you updated! Sorry I didn't read and review it earlier, I've been really busy the past week.

Poor Erika! I love all the gym leaders, I'm worried for her. I'm also curious about Will's illness, your story has really made me love him(his natu sounds adorable)and i'm wondering what his illness is and if he'll be healed.

I really love how you include so many pairings, and also different gender pairings. You don't see a lot of stories with both of those.

Oh and I think you should go with Lance x Ash, just because i love yaoi.

I say go with whatever comes along, but eh, what do I know. Though Lance/Lorelei was always a pet favorite of mine. :D
Anyways, another well-done chapter.../sniffs/ Poor Winona. How will she face Flannery?

omg you updated!! dfkhsjghkasgh (fanspasms)
I always prefer to read this on fanfiction to get all the juicy material. XD The story is just so addicting. I must know what happens! And Will is the cutest thing ever~ D:
As for the ending, I don't mind either LancexAsh or LancexLorelei. I'm leaning towards an LancexLorelei ending but I would like to see more LancexAsh too... XD *shot*

Y'know... I was thinking about this fic before I went to sleep this morning.

Odd how I wake up and find out it was updated. xD;

Anywho, great chapter! Lorelei's father is so sneaky and suspicious. I hope it doesn't get him into trouble. Ah, well.

And Volk's band! Haha! Sydney's like me when I break a string on my guitar. I hate it when that happens, especially after I spend my money on something else. Flint ~

I hope you continue writing this, I really like the concept of it! And you're right, we do need more gym leader/elite centric fics in the pokemon fandom.

Quote: So, I decided the Pokemon fandom sucks recently. All I ever see nowadays is Contestshipping and all the usual Ash stuff. Makes me sad. Hardly any Gym/Elite centred fics at all! If there are, then someone needs to tell me! I’m having withdrawal.
lol i agree. I've went trough 4 long hours(or more) searching for fics like this, which went trough over 58 pages. And i found ONLY about 6/7 of these kind of fics. Whatever rating they have.
The fics REALLY INTERESTING. Write more please...I wanna read more...*has slight withdrawal due to lack of interesting fics*. Thanks Yoru Ryu ^_^

Great chapter!
Oh dear, where is Erika anyways...
Oh well. I anxiously await the next update!

I love it when I find I story that I thought I lost. Anyway, I read Chapter 3 before Chapter 2 because I thought I had already read it but I was wrong...
Morty! Yay! He's my favorite gym leader so I had to say something. It's great that you made him creepy! He does look it (he looks cross-eyed) and he has that funky mullet-do.
"Non-committed" should be "Noncommittal" (When Volker agrees that his hair is boring) You have a few other grammar mistakes, but that was the only one that bothered me.
I have to say, I'm really enjoying your cast of characters, I don't think I've ever found a story that includes Steven, Lance, Karen, Erika, Morty, Glacia, Sidney, Volker, Wallace, Flint, Phoebe, Cynthia, Ash, Gary, and Jasmine. I like all of them anyway. I hope you decide to update soon but no pressure.
Poor Steven, he has to make such hard decisions. And I always thought he and Glacia would get along.

Ehh, you write with more emotion than I do.
Love The Pink Spinda--it's all kakkanobi's fault! She's the one who made me read it! Dx But it's awesome! I've been bugging you over at Deviantart (atmymercy) and I'm gonna bug you over here, too! Write chapter four! Of course, I shouldn't be talking--BOTH my Harry Potter fics are DEAD. I need to work on those. *sweatdrop* And my Whistle! fics! The only one that's really alive is Ricochet, which has a LOT of influence from The Pink Spinda. So! Keep writing!
I know life is probably hard for you, but as they say in Fiddler on the Roof, why should I suffer?