What a nice story! It was hilarious! Yay to the author-sama! :)

Such a promising first chapter, but the lack of attention to details in the second chapter prevents me from reading further.

Seven years later, Lina should have good enough control of a Dragon Slave to make it dance in a circle, not crash her ride.

Suspension of disbelief can only go so far.

I love your story and have read all of it but the 15th chapter. grrr it says story not found so i dont really get the ending but good anyway

Hahahaha~ Love your story! It's really good!

^_^ I loved it. Too bad it's over. I like the Home Sweet Home bit alot. ^o^

Not a cliffhanger! Gah!! I need to know what happens!!! Please write more soon!!!!

So- are you going to pair Val and Lina? I think they make a good couple, personally, and Lina and Zel have been done, fairly often. Of course, I LIKE odd couples... *laughs* Good luck with the writing and I hope you do more soon.

NO! y did you stop!!! continue!! im dying to know what happens! grrr if xellos kills valgaav ill be really.....um angered...anyways um yeah keep writing!!!!

Oooookaaay, now I'm getting seriously worried about what icky plans the Trickster Priest might have in store for Lina & co.

You would have thought that they'd have learned not to trust a Mazoku with info like this by now. ;)

Hehehe! Go for the treasure, Lina!

*yawn* Daril is sooooo boring...

*applause*

*runs off to read next chapter*

What the...? To Zelgadis? Or to some other weirdo?