(except for that one time when Neji had pushed her too far (away)…)

Above part was awesome. I loved your use of parentheses. Great work on everything.

I think The Lightness of Being is beautiful.
I love Tenten and wish that she was given more time in the manga, and I love the way you write her story.

Oh I wish I could write like that... I really like your style;)

I am an extremely BIG fan of Tenten, the way she is so different and unique. I really liked the way you portrayed her, being segregated from other children at such a young age and then finally soaring higher than the rest - free and liberated. Well, that's my interpretation anyway (if that's not the way you meant it then I'm sorry).

Keep up the good work!

Oh, I loved this to pieces!

The whole concept of TenTen as a bird makes this seem like a NejiTen, and I'm not sure if that was intentional or not, but I enjoyed that it felt that way.

I've always wondered a bit at TenTen's history, as we really aren't given anything to work with when it concerns her. I think that makes TenTen both easy, and also incredibly hard, to write.

You breathed life into her character that I never imagined her having.

This was perfect, and I'm in awe that you like my writing when you can pull miracles like this one out of nowhere (everywhere).

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