Well written chapter... good work.

really good chapter. I loved it. Please update soon!

Melissa

Really amazing chapter and I love the way you write Colin and Finn! update asap

wow!

Hey! this was really good! What an intense conversation they had, huh? I can totally understand Rorys reasons to not trust logan right away, but as this is RORY and LOGAN, I hope and know youre going to make it work, right? Well, you better! Do Colin and Finn have anyonther plan to get rory and logan back together other than leaving them alone for a while? Hope you update this soon! Happy new Year!

Excellent chapter! I cannot wiat to read more!

Aww i love it. please update soon. its so cute.

Melissa

Great story...can't wait to read more soon!

Amazing chapter.

[“Rory, I jumped off a cliff. It’s not pretty and I’m not particularly proud of it, but I did. I survived that, I survived jumping off a hundred foot cliff but I swear I will not survive being with out you.”]

To some they may find that line cheesy and cliche but I find it sweet and real. Its my favorite line second only to Rory's [“I’ll always come back.”]

In my advanced age [laughs], I prefer fluff. Like Logan, I dont do drama. Not a lot of writers can pull off dramatic scenes well. Most go over-board with too many emotions that leave many of us cringing. Fortunately, you're one of those writers that manage to create a perfect blend of humor and drama that leave us wanting more.

I also want to commend you for writing a character of Rory that is strong but still has a hint of vulnerability in her. I was afraid that she'll readily succumb to Logan's "ILoveYou's", glad that she let it all her anger out instead of the passive-aggressive stance she took in the show.

Anyway, this is a fantastic chapter. There may be bumps in the road ahead of them but I hope their love is strong enough to withstand it.

Update soon and Merry Christmas!

Cheers!

i love your story, it's really really great!please update soon, because i can't wait for more and i hope Rory and Logan will figure everything out soon!

amazing!

I love it please update soon! :D

This chapter was great.

Rory really needed to tell Logan how she felt. As much as it hurt, she couldn't just let him think that 'I love you' would solve all their problems. The last line "I'll always come back.'" was wonderful.

Glad you kept the Mitchum phone in there.

I know you said that this chapter isnt what you wanted it to be... but i think it's awesome. It's a really good chapter.

I'm glad Rory didnt just take logan back straight away when he told her that he loved her... she definately needed to give him a piece of her mind.

Love it!

please update this is really good and I need more