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Angelic Rebel 2008-07-04 ch 19,	abuseI absolutely loved the whole story! :) I would have sent a review earlier, but I was too excited to find out what happened next, so I waited until the end. Lol :)
IcelandGirl812 2008-07-03 ch 19,	abuseOoh! New, er old, person of the order! Cool! Cookies!! Yum!! =D
Ironwood Ashes 2008-07-02 ch 19,	abuseI love your story! You stay well in character for all of the POVs, which is truly remarkable to me...perhaps just because I'd fail so miserably. I also love that Gemma is stuck engaged to that dratted Simon. I was rooting for him over Kartik all along! I also find it refreshing to see Kartik portrayed as evil for once. And I never liked Emily-thanks for sending her to the Bethlem madhouse and then killing her off in your story. That sounds terrible, but it's heartfelt. Which is probably worse. Lol The only thing I have to say criticism wise is this: Felicity may be shallow, and no doubt she likes her good looking men as much as the next girl (especially sexy magical ones that have names like Absyrtus Lol), but wouldn't her horrible past experiences with men make her a bit more cautious than that around them, even if they have magic to F* with her head? Just a thought I had... You are very creative and talented, and I'll be looking forward to seeing more updates! Hope that satisfies your desire for reviews, too!
IcelandGirl812 2008-06-27 ch 18,	abuseI know I've read this before, because I remember it and it's in my alerts and favorites. But I can't for the life of me remember why I didn't leave a review...Oh well. At least I'm leaving one now. I loved it!! That's all I can think of to say...Oh! And PLEASE update SOON!! =D
Goddess1408 2008-06-24 ch 18,	abuseit's getting good, i understand about the updates. it takes me ages to get mine up and write them . :P
Threadbetween 2008-05-23 ch 17, anon.	abuseOMG! KEEP WRITING!PLEASE!
lunlun 2008-05-05 ch 3, anon.	abuseI'm pretty much mad at you for making Kartik into bad guy. I really can't overlook that fact, I really can't.
hi 2008-05-05 ch 1, anon.	abusethat was... interesting
-ForeverSearching- 2008-05-05 ch 17,	abuseI don't think you're crazy. The best characters never seem to be controlled by the author. Poor Simon.
SNikorasu 2008-05-04 ch 17,	abusehm...figments of your imagination not obeying what you say when its YOUR mind...and your not crazy? lol poor Simon (and behind the scenes Kartik is ready to kill him. ah yes the very first chapter of Forsaken...interesting. Great job though!
-ForeverSearching- 2008-04-11 ch 16,	abuseGreat story. I love that your story is just kind of writing itself and that you don't really have a plan. I find that those are the best types of stories anyway. Update soon, please.
SNikorasu 2008-04-11 ch 16,	abuselol Medea gets a personality now. Omg are your characters are arguing with the author? was she like "HEY LILAYA! WHAT ABOUT ME HUH! YOU DEVELOP EVERYONE ELSE AND LEAVE ME OUT!?!?!?!"lol just my crazy imagination.
SNikorasu 2008-03-25 ch 15,	abusenice theory on the whole door of darkness. and great chapter too. keep it up!
SNikorasu 2008-02-25 ch 14,	abuseWow your such an awsome writer your charcters are literally brought to life. I mean they're even rebellious! They won't even listen to you...their controller. (cant call you the creator cuz you know...Libra Bray?) anyways great job!
snaffle 2008-02-24 ch 14,	abusewoah. I so did not see that coming. But I like it!

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