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RagdollStuffy
2005-12-27
ch 3,
abuseI dunno, maybe it's just me, but this part here : 'then snuggled back into sleep' got me laughing so hard.

It must be the mental image of Haprer 'snuggling' that was funny :)

Very nice story =)

BTW, I'm archiving FYI
Neeri
2004-09-13
ch 3, anon.
abuseI loved it.
Harper's the best!

Neeri
Mary Rose
2002-03-08
ch 3, anon.
abuseThe good guys won. Way cool.
Techgrrl
2002-01-27
ch 3,
abuseThis is the first Andromeda story I ever *liked*. It is still a fun read, and I come back every few weeks to enjoy it again.
Antares*
2001-12-16
ch 3, anon.
abuseWow! that was great, another story by one of my favorite authors:-)Keep writing ur awsome!!
~Becky~ bekybob13@aol.com
2001-12-06
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou know, I don't think I originally finished this....it must have just slipped past my sensors. Oh well. Still a great job. More Harper stories....I command ye! ;)
Harper's Gurl (Not signed i...
2001-11-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseYou said you hoped we enjoyed it... AND WE DID!!! IT ROCKED!! WRITE MORE!! HARPER RULZ!!! COFFEE GOES TO MY HEAD!!!!!!!!
Electric Monk
2001-10-31
ch 3,
abuseThat was really good, you got the charactors down pat (except, as someone down there mentioned Trance should be written a little less innocently, {stealing from later episodes she's a lot less innocent then she appears}) and it was well written. Well I don't blame you for it, having seen only 4 episodes at the time of writing, Andromeda doesn't have shields they just seem to relay on point defense to deal with missiles and armor to deal with energy weapons and missiles that get by point defense.
Meg the fierce lady
2001-10-04
ch 3,
abuseI think its so cool! Awesome story with that cutey pie Harper. Keep writing!
Spooky-Girl
2001-09-30
ch 3,
abuseHehee, I liked it! :0)
Renfro92w
2001-09-17
ch 3, anon.
abuseFantastic. I've been starved for good Andromeda stories since the season ended, and you provided, Diana. Good job especially not knowing Tyr well, with characterizing him. Trance is slightly less inocent than that, but not by much. You got the auto-defense systems right on the mark. I truly enjoyed this story. Felt like a well written episode with thoughts of the crew to boot!
Kat
2001-09-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseAwesome story!
Connie Linck
2001-09-08
ch 3, anon.
abuseHi,
Just got done reading your story "Locked Out" Fantastic story. Very enjoyable reading. I only recently found Andromeda fanfic and have fell in love with it. Now I usually read slash but I love this story so I now check out all the Andromeda fic. May real life give you a break and your muse sing in your ear. Hopefully we will be reading more of your Andromeda fic. Love Harper. Really love Try/Harper.
Take care,
Thank you,
Connie Linck
brat64
2001-09-08
ch 3,
abuselittle o's and big aw's! lol. i love it!! wha a fitting ending!! i loooove it. i hope you write more harper fics!!
Penelope325
2001-09-07
ch 3, anon.
abuseThis is one the best fics I've ever read.
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