I like the way that you write, everything is very personal, like you're getting inside their heads. I can't wait to see where you are taking this story, so update soon!

This fic is absolutely amazing. You write the characters so well, and I love the in-depth look at the Petrelli family. The blonde woman is a complete mystery, can't wait to find out more about her (at the moment I'm thinking Lindeman's wife/ex-wife? Lindeman is Claire's father? *shrugs* I've really got no idea).

Please update soon, because it is brilliant and I love it :D

Nice start can't wait for more

Good a bit confusing for the people with low IQ but good.

More Paire interaction next chapter please

This is an amazing story. And I love your attention to detail that so many other fics skip over. You really have the characters down pat especially how Claire's feeling. I hate it when people say Claire's too angsty. She has a right to be! You've carried all of their emotions off beautifully. I'm really excited to see your take on Peter's dream sequence.

Hope you continue this story, you are a fantastic writer with a great story being written here.

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