|Reviews for Little Miss Seductress|
| BlackPoppy.0 2/19/13 . chapter 2
If you were ever to edit this, I would like Hinata more in-character please!
| BlackPoppy.0 2/19/13 . chapter 1
I am very excited to read this story! For the lingest time I didn't want to read it because of the title, but this is really good! And it's only the prologue! The characters are SURPRISINGLY almost, 100%, genuinely in-character, which is incredibly hard to do with AU stories. I'm looking forward to next chapter!
| Guest 2/2/13 . chapter 17
Oh my, Ino, you go GURRRRRLLLL!
| MusicAngel13 1/24/13 . chapter 1
Cool but really this sounds like boys vs girls who's stronger
| angellyx13 1/2/13 . chapter 20
I like your plot idea but I don't like how you wrote most of the story. Sasuke is a bastard who thinks everyone has to do what he says. He doesn't deserve Sakura. And why is Sakura the one always giving into Sasuke's demands? That doesn't seem fair. Sakura says she was forced to date and get engaged with Sasuke but she didn't even try to do anything about it. Your story is pretty sexist even though I'm pretty sure that wasn't you intention.
| Topaz Princess 1/2/12 . chapter 19
This was a really gate High School fic. I really hoped they would look for a compromise in power rather than total control so as not to nullify the plan and stay with the guys they have to obviously fallen wayyy hard for
| iSierra 10/30/11 . chapter 19
This story is awesome, but I'm tired enough to skip reviewing each chapter...So, this story is the best high-school-playgirl fic ever! Just improve your grammar, will you? It gives me goosebumps. lol
| Guest 7/12/11 . chapter 10
I hate how sasuke attitude. The way those type of people act irritates me
| onedirection394 3/29/11 . chapter 14
hahahahaha! I love this story! I was laughing so hard at the elephant part! !
| AkaneTheSlayer 3/27/11 . chapter 3
Really bad grammar mistakes and usage, spelling errors...
Though, not bad
I'm a grammar Nazi :P
| ChocolateAddict 2/2/11 . chapter 2
You have excellent characterisation, a plot that's really, really interesting, and you even write the pairings I like.
Those are the good things I can see about this fic.
The bad is mainly the writing. I'm a total language Nazi, so I'm not used to sugarcoating this, but what makes this fic pretty unbearable for me is the standard of your English.
With a casual read-through, I'm seeing a lot of very annoying mistakes, such as the lack of capitalisation at the beginning of sentences. Punctuation and spelling are off as well, although I don't know how much of that is my British spelling.
My point is, the numerous typos make it very difficult for me to focus on the story, so I'd like to request for you to clean up the chapters. I understand that you aren't really around anymore, and that this story is being continued by someone else, but I'd still like to know the plot of the first half of "Little Miss Seductress", and it'd be really hard for me to survive reading through the typos.
Don't get me wrong, I really love this story(wouldn't be reviewing if I didn't!), and I think your plot and characterisation are amazingly spot-on, I just find all the mistakes really ruin the reading experience for me.
| roxana3050 12/29/10 . chapter 20
more plzzz i love it
| RD-chan hokage 12/22/10 . chapter 2
crap! that SasuSaku scene was HOT! XD
| mUmaRhz 10/10/10 . chapter 17
oh true friendship! and that sooo cute!
| mUmaRhz 10/10/10 . chapter 16
YEA! SHAME THOSE BIIIIARRRCHES!