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| Dubblez-L-5 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abusehere ya go: a w w w w w w it's cute. update |
| lilnewsie77 2007-11-01 ch 1, | abuseI really loved this and I hope you continue it. I loved that Yelina was in the story. It added a little female touch to it and that worked well. Keep Writing! |
| labkat 2007-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've been waiting for more Kyle scenes too. You story is great! Keep going! |
| mafiaprincess_a.k.a. alisa 2007-10-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseGOOD START...and i like, that yelina DIDN'T back down...horatio has ALWAYS wanted kids...and HAD he known about kyle years before,maybe the kid wouldn't have turned out the way he did...imo, kyle's mother DIDN'T try hard enough to find horatio...i'd like to see MORE. alisa |
| Lea 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt was short, but got me thinking. I hope you do some additional chapters. Very Good. |
| raindropsX 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseaww, this was amazing |
| lt2 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseyeah i think a sequel of some sort is in order.excellent so far!! |
| daxy 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseaww, great story! I'll read it over and over again! Love it! |