 Katherine Moonhawk 2008-07-26 . chapter 1Okay, here's a couple of things,one I'm SURE I read and reviewed your story- gift of love, however if I haven't, and even if I'm repeating myself I think you deserve it, I think that story is epic, I think it's truly worthy of some sort of high standard prize and I think you should seriously consider becoming a writer, I don't know how old you are, but for whatever age, that fic is fantastic. You've managed to embody someone else characters and weave them into your storyline, you've got a complex history and characters and intertwining plot twists for all of your creations and the story makes you want to keep reading, you're spelling and grammar are great so that doesn't distract. Recently I reccommended (sorry that might not be spelt right) it to a good friend, who hasn't even seen shaman king. She wants to now because she's started to read it, she was only up to the 2oth chapter, but because her mum needed the computer she printed the whole thing out so she could read it! Apparrently there were well over a hundred, god knows she got in trouble with her mum about it, mine would've slapped me a couple of times and got me to do some of the more back breaking jobs, since dad's in hong kong... Anyway! Sorry, I'm getting angsty, I 'd just like to say this prequel compliments the sequel, though the story compliments itself, it's fantastically well written and I really hope you put a new chapter on, and soon!XD I'd also be pretty honoured if you'd read my two fics- The Mountain Heights and A sense of foreboding, cos you pretty much inspired me to get off my ass and write them,
you're a fantastic writer,
Kat |
 FireWolfFred 2008-04-21 . chapter 1Cool. brilliant quality same as the predacesor. i prefer Yi to Ren though so this story could reach my favorate shaman king spot. thanks for writing it and posting it. look forwards to next chapter, (jumps around exitedly like giddy little girl...so sad.) (just in case of confusion, i am a boy.) bye. |
 April-Lathyrus 2007-10-23 . chapter 1hey, this story is pretty good, the characters aren't as familiar as your other story "A gift of love" with Ren and all in it, so it's actually a bit refreshing. Very interesting finish to the chapter, would love to see an update soon! -April- |