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yumi2468
2008-05-25
ch 1,
abuseVery good! Very funny! It'd be nice if you'd add some to it.

Also, no offense, but for chapter one, when Redd called Nook a "sqruirl"? That's spelled "squirrel".
RU BU'S NIGGER KILLING MACH...
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseI've been dealing with death in the family, I don't have the ** conviction to lie about anything.

I will rip your intestines out from your dirty **. I will feast upon any infants that you bear. I will mutilate your kin so badly that depleted uranium babies will look far more pleasant. I will take your pets and tear them in half, and run them over until they become one with the asphalt - blackened and smeared.

God would allow this, and I would be safe from the fiery limbo of torture. And why is that?

Because God hates you. God wants you to suffer for being such a brainless **. God is a masochistic bastard. He masturbates when your guts and fetuses are being **. You unloved insect.

You have no other choice. Just kill yourself. It's better being a dead piece of trash than a living piece of trash.

I'm sorry to bring this up again, but I can no longer contain myself. I'm so depressed it's not even funny. I can't do anything. I feel horrible for the people around me because they have to deal with me.

Melissa's gone, she called and said she wasn't coming back. I just don't know what to do. I've got two kids and I don't know how to do this on my own. I can't eat, sleep, or do anything. Am I suppose to feel this way? Am I suppose to be so heart broken that I don't know what to do?

I love her and I still do. I can't understand what's going on. I just don't know what to do. I feel like I should just crawl in hole and die... I don't know...

I'll try to be normal, but I'm sorry to my friends and fellow Sins if I act badly out of sadness. I do have a history of depression and I'm going to start back on medication for a while. I ask people to please not talk too much about sex and relationships. This is hard enough as it is, and as I love to see you all happy, I'm way too sensitive right now to not blow a fuse.

If anyone has any advice please help me. I don't want you to feel sorry for me, I just want you to be there. Even though I don't know you guys in real life, what you say will help me. Thanks for being there.
I will rip your intestines out from your dirty **. I will feast upon any infants that you bear. I will mutilate your kin so badly that depleted uranium babies will look far more pleasant. I will take your pets and tear them in half, and run them over until they become one with the asphalt - blackened and smeared.

God would allow this, and I would be safe from the fiery limbo of torture. And why is that?

Because God hates you. God wants you to suffer for being such a brainless **. God is a masochistic bastard. He masturbates when your guts and fetuses are being **. You unloved insect.

You have no other choice. Just kill yourself. It's better being a dead piece of trash than a living piece of trash.
FangWishWeavile
2007-10-30
ch 1,
abuseThis is really funny!
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