Wow. Nice job. There wasn't too much yaoi, but there was just enough to satisfy, all the yaoi fans out there. Keep it up. BB

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This was great. Loved it.

My only hang-up...the boxers. Not exactly period correct.

Other than that, great job :D

this is SCARY! SCARILY GAY! WHAT IS WRONG WITH U?

Wonderful slash job as always! Keep contintuing your Jarda arts; they're awesome! This was also very well written, and clean-cut. Your dialogue was very clear, and you handled the slash gracefully (something that's hard to do for some). Anyway, all in all this is excellent! Keep writing! _ ) O D P B)

-Golmere Verns

I found this to be really erotic and wonderfully written (I'm perverted lol). The last part of this made me laugh quite a lot.

omg YES!

surry luver of yaoi.

how about THE INNOCENCE OF YOUTH?

WOW!

go the yaoi!

ferseriously!

Well done and keep up the writing by the way, when i was reading your story i felt a stirring in my heart...i only ever get that when i'm reading Deltora Quest (cause deltora is the only books i read) so WELL DONE!

Odaiji ni, ja ne

Meggii-kun

ur stories r really good. i can't wait to see wat else u came up with :]

I loved it! I can't wait for anymore stories you might write!