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| Munebunny 2008-06-11 ch 1, | abuseLove the last line. The whole story is awesome but the ending just perfected it. I wish GSR had a happy ending on-screen as well...but I suppose there is still time for that. ^_^ |
| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuse*snicker* I've had (as I'm sure every CSI: fan has) mental images of Nick and Warrick calling Sara 'Grissom' post-marriage just to mess with the couple's head. *sniff* Alas, no such luck for me! ~IGC t DM |
| Sarafly 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseOMG!. Its so beautiful. I love it. |
| kasey82800 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abusevery nice...loved it |
| JellybeanChiChi 2008-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI can't tell you how many times I've read this. It's very upbeat without being too fluffy. Thanks for it. |
| bordercollie 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is great :-) |
| Kankulex1701 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuse*LOL* Damn, your last line just caught me unguarded! You plastered a BIG smile on my face! Great job! |
| SuzieGeorge 2008-01-22 ch 1, | abuseDear lord, do I ever wish that this was the direction that the writers of CSI had chosen to go in!! It's brilliant, just the perfect amount of fluff mixed with your normal brilliant character development. Thanks for sharing, love it love it love it. |
| Grissom1 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story particularly the last line! |
| Keegan Elizabeth 2007-12-10 ch 1, | abuseSo I'm well over a month late in reading this...but I wanted to review nonetheless and say that I loved your story! I'm going to go w/ the majority on this one and say that the last line was priceless :-) |
| xkiisstheraiin 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseOHMYGOD that last line absolutely clinched it! love :DD |
| Ponys 2007-11-19 ch 1, | abusehahaha lovely ending. Pure logic, that last line. thank you for writing this, seriously! |
| jtbwriter 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseWhy didn't I see this before? This is good-I love the ring shopping and the cute way Grissom decided to get Sara the engagement ring...very sweet! Thanks for the humor and love in this-boy are we going to need it! |
| CSIhottie001 2007-11-04 ch 1, | abuseWow that was a very sweet story. At the beging and for a little while in the story (until you got to Tiffany's & Co.) Sara didn't seem like she was Sara. Like she was saying a lot of different stuff then Sara would say.Sorry if that sounds confusing, but I LOVED the ending. Its was so cool and a little funny at the same time anyways I liked it. Very good story. Very sweet. |
| lamcsi 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseOh, so sweet. But I'll bet that Sara's vest is a lot smaller than Gil's vest. Really liked this story and I'm a big fan of your writing. Castles in the Air is my very favorite. |