Aw! That was really well written! Good job! As a Rika-chama fan, I am very pleased! ^_^

Poor Rika-chan. ;_; Takano is my fav character, however. Good job!

Nyaa~, Takano's so cool. But like Major Montana Max from Hellsing, I can't wait to see her fall. :3

Yup, this whole anime is just one giant mindf*. Pretty good reflection on it here. Gj.

While there's nothing wrong with the story itself, spoiling basically the entire series in your summary (and then, having given no warning, /confirming/ that it's a spoiler inside) is /not cool/. I'd seriously suggest making the summary just a bit more vague about the actual identity of the murderer and putting a whopping spoiler tag on it.

I agree. She is 'the curse.'

Good work!

I liked it. Maybe you could try write story? There are few HnNkN fanfic that arent oneshots.

It's okay. Although it may spoil others.

However, Oyashiro-sama is not Takano, it's Hanyuu.

Anyways, it was good to read.