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| dyslexu 2007-12-19 ch 4,  | abuseYour characterization of Lee was right on. His thoughts about Zak, his father and Kara were appropriately telling. |
| gems 2007-11-23 ch 4, anon. | abuseYour stories were amazing! I loved that you showed parts of Lee's past and made all of the possibilities seem very real. |
| Anastashia 2007-11-05 ch 3, | abuseVery nice. |
| SeaWraith 2007-11-04 ch 3, | abuseVery nice! I particularly liked Part 2 - there isn't enough Racetrack fic out there. I look forward to part 4. |
| The Breeze 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abusehehehehehheehehe Is that a valid review? |
| hazelburger 2007-10-27 ch 2, | abuseI loved that chapter. By the end of it i was laughing so hard and so loud my flat mate came into my room looking at me like i was crazy. Fantastic job and i cant wait until the next chapter |
| Anastashia 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseNice job. A nice mood all through it and I loved the end. |
| Mariel3 2007-10-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is another winner. The dialogue is spot on and a total pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing this with us! |
| Ammonite 2007-10-22 ch 1, | abuseVery nicely written. I was entirely caught up. |
| Mariel3 2007-10-21 ch 1, | abuseOpened this on impulse, and totally enjoyed it! You did a great job of interpersing reality with his hallucinations/memories and I felt almost compelled to read to the end. It's a nice feeling to have. Liked the insights into Zak and Lee's life at home with their mother, and...well, I just liked all of it - including the last bit with Zak and sick Lee. Thanks for sharing! |
| kitty 2007-10-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved this short story with the intermix of reality and Lee's hallucinations. I can't help but wonder if Zak was really there with Lee in the last hallucination though. Can't wait for the next chapter! |