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| trigun1509 2008-01-24 ch 7,  | abusethe end was perfect.. heck the whole story was perfect!! great job! |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-01-03 ch 7, | abuseAww..how sweet...glad he finally asked her...great job...each color was wonderful and you did very well describing how the colors meant something... |
| SallyJetson 2007-12-28 ch 7, | abuseBeautiful ending and a wonderful way to tie everything back into the colors of the rainbow. Good job. |
| squintsquad03 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abuseAw. I love the end with the rainbow and Danny's proposal was really sweet. |
| laurzz 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abusewhat.a.beautiful.ending.! perfect end to a perfect story :) |
| egoofy34 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseGreat Finish. Loved the whole story. Well done! |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseaww i loved it great work abbylover |
| Pedroia the Destroya 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseI Love it! Green was my favorite! |
| TatianaMik 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseHow cute. I love the ending. How perfect. |
| Brinchen86 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseAw! What a fantastic chapter! - It started to rain, and a rainbow appeared in the air. Red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo and violet came together and created a sign of perfect happiness. Not having thought to bring an umbrella, Danny and Lindsay started running. Running home, but also running to their new life together. They couldn’t wait to get started. - This was my favourite part. A wonderful and romantic fic! Great work! |
| ncisabbylover 2007-12-25 ch 6, | abuseaw yay fluff! love it abbylover |
| squintsquad03 2007-12-24 ch 6, | abuseThe poem was really good. I like them having their comfortable conversation together. Last line is very true. Forever is perfect for them. :) |
| JennCorinthos 2007-12-01 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter... Love the idea of Lindsay showing Danny wround her home town... Can not wait to read more... JENNIFER |
| Kawaii-babi 2007-11-30 ch 5, | abuseI always thought it was purple that came after blue... well... im gonna say purple. You know how when a baby's born, they're like this reddish-purple colour and then they wipe off the blood and all that stuff? Yeah... well... thats just a suggestion.. or maybe they could be fighting about what colour to paint a baby's room? Basically, all my ideas revolve around babies... |
| TatianaMik 2007-11-30 ch 5, | abuseHm. When I see Indigo I think of Indigo Blue jeans... |