please continue that was good creepy-but good CONTINUE!

this is getting really good! can't wait for the next chap.! keep up the good work!

just a little thing Japanesse schools start at any time betwen 830 am and 10 am, they can go off campus for lunch as well. come on learn your world culture.

Wow, this is a real cliffe! Now i really want to see the next chapter! Please Write!

KILL ERIK DEATH TO ERIK! (I really love this story so much I'll kill Erik!)

dat dan dan...

that was good ^^

There a few spelling issues, "Due" instead of "do" etc.

Still some issues with Tohru's characterisation, but as the story is good, i don't notice it ^^

The end note was chilling.. can't wait for the next chapter!

nalanna ^^

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I'm happy to help ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter :D
nalanna ^^

now im addicted! great story! i love the movie and the book of the poto! and i loved the bok the phantom of the additorium. im so sorry about your snoopy collectin! *gives snoopy nascar plushie* i know i woud sill someone if the did that to my rose collection! (did i mechion im obbsessed with poto?) keep writing!

Your making me heartbroken seeing Tohru treating Kyo this way! Please end this as Kyoru because I've been hoping it was Kyoru and I think the voice in her head is Erik. Please write and make it Kyoru!

May i make a sugesstion? Don't write out the lyrics to the songs. I don't know what anyone else thinks about this, but i think it is boring, and i skip over them.

I like the story though ^^ There are a few issues with the correct use of which words (Hear instead of here etc, for when they are listening to something)

You got Uo in character on a basic level, and I like Hana. Momiji and Kisa are good, and Yuki and Kyo's relationship doesn't quite work out but it doesn't matter.

Tohru: gah... but maybe that is because she is possessed and isn't herself. I don't think she would shout. Ever.

i do like this story, very much so in fact. Please don't be upset at my comments, or offended that i think i am important enough to make you upset... O.o Maybe i should just shut up now...

looking forward to the next chapter ^^ update soon :D

nalanna ^^

Erik is evil (olds up a knife to kill Erik) MUHAHA!

AMAZING! i luved it so so so so so so so so so so so much!please continue, i luv it! ^-^

when is going to be a Kyoru? I mean is it supposed to be or are you pairing her up with this Erik guy?

interesting...

You used the wrong "too"... "too" is for somthing added onto the end of summat.

the necklace was extravagant ne?

kudos!

nalanna ^^

the necklace reminded my of titanic, oh well. good job cant wait for the next chapter! ^.-