:D Neeheehee. _ I court death by snickering every time I read this; it's that good. I can't wait to see what you do with Eva's revenge and (possibly) Sayo accidentally usurping the argument to carry away the champion title. _

With your newfound Eva knowledge, you can go so far with so many characters... *nudgenudgehint* :D

LMAO, that was great! The transition from paragraph to paragraph is very fluid.

The only problem I saw in this chapter was the sentence where Eva said, "I thought you were happy with that ghost girl what's always following you around." It should 'who's' instead of 'what's'.

Over than that, good work! I would like to see what happens next :).

Grand Phoenix