I really enjoyed your story, but how tragic. It calls to mind that old saying, "Pride goeth before the fall", and yes, horses can have gray eyes. They're called glass-eyed & wall-eyed.

Thanks!

Very good. I love how Kanade is the storyteller, quite sad, but really interesting.

Keep writing!

Nice! I like how its got the 'story- teller' theme to it.

I love how your fics have such a "story-teller" feel to them! This was well written and, yeah, no one mentions Entei that much (how sad).

Btw, horses can have sleet gray eyes. It's beautiful, but rare.

AMAZING!BY THE WAY WHO WERE THE TWO ELDEST?WAS IT ASAGI,ROKU,DAI,MOEGI,OR SHION?TELL ME!MAKE A ANOTHER STORY!