Very good story... so very sad.

and he did not kill himself?

Oh my god. That was so sweet and sad. D: Axel/Riku isn't even my OTP and I loved this to death. I loved the way this was written... Aw. I loved everything about this. Excellent job!

So sad...yet so damn beautiful. The way Axel was thinking back to that day when they did nothing but make love... I applaud you! This was a great work of fiction and you are an effin' sweet author! ~two thumbs-up~

I really liked it despite the tragic ending. Cheers!

Well I liked this a whole lot. And... Just... THAT was your FIRST attempt at smut? I'm jealous. :x

I really liked a lot of the ideas you had in here. It was really great- and the sex was... Damn. >_<

Also it's AxelRiku too so it instantly pwns. ^_^

*bliss*

The sex was hot and fun, and then you had to do /that/. Of course I figured it'd happen from the first scene, but still.

I'm not sure what kind of relationship they had beyond the sex--that's all we saw of them in detail (you hinted at other stuff, like Riku being the only reason Axel smiles). If you really wanna hit people in the face with character death, showing emotional attachments does the trick. And the sex--can't forget the sex. :D

I like how Axel insists he hates Riku, yet returns to the grave every week.

Thanks for sharing~

Wow. That was certainly something *is speechless cuz she hasn't read that kind of KH sex scene in a while*

I meant that in a good way, by the way. ^_^

I really liked the way the story flowed. I think the tansitions were perfect, though i do believe there was a few run on sentences.