i like this story. its funny, i died laughing when i first read it are u making a sequel? possibly ramza/rapha or balthier/meliadoul? hope u do!

I'm more like Ramza/Agrias fan but, I find this cute! Mustadio is such a nice guy! :) If you want, you can check out my first FFT fanfic!

Great work here. Bravo!

Aww, that was cute. ^^ Ever since I saw that scene, I've been a complete Mustadio/Agrias fan. Too bad there isn't more of that on this site...

I loved your Balthier. =D

I liked Mustadio/Agrias, even before this extra scene was created too! I love this extended version of yours... Mustadio as a character is awesome, and making him a little bit more awkward than he already is made him a lot more interesting. Good job! :D

I loved it! It was cute and well written. I like the Agrias/Mustadio pairing as well, so it was nice to read this. A few parts actually made me laugh out loud. Good job and I'm adding this story to my favorites! Hope to read more from you soon XD

Great story!

And for the records... in japanese version the word "friendship" doesn't appear at all ;) I think the FFTWotL translator is a Ramza/Agrias fan.

“Thank you, Mustadio. I will treasure it, as I do our friendship.”

Sorry, Mustadio, but you just got friendzoned. Maybe Meliadoul will finally pick up on what you're laying down.

Yay! A Mustadio and Agrias fic! LMAO! I died at these parts: “Umm… yea… yes, she is.” There, he said it, now to find a suitable hole to crawl into and die. Marach smirked. “Because I am. Besides, even if you are thoroughly rejected, you are hardly the type to concede defeat. The longer you follow the lady knight like a hapless puppy that has been kicked too many times, the longer you are safe from my wrath.”

“Do not tell me that you deem Count Orlandeau as suspicious!”

Scowling, Marach sneered in contempt. “I am no longer so trusting even to those who deem themselves my allies and my friends. Being an old man does not excuse one’s penchant for evil and lechery.”

“Are you aware of your sister-complex?”

“And you like older women, so shut your mouth and go into the store!” snapped Marach before pushing the blond man inside.

Balthier groaned. “Cousin, when will you think you are ready? Certainly not years from now when this war is over—if it is over. Live for the moment and if you die, at least you die by her hands.”

“Balthier!”

“What? It is the truth!”

Great story! =D

I like the way you portrayed all the characters. You also portrayed Blathier (super sleuth and mr. dashing) and Mustadio (witty and mr. clueless about romance) the way I would put them in a fanfiction(but surely nowhere as beautiful as yours).

The story is also so realistic! Like if I were to make a special chapter in the game concerning Agrias and Mustadio I would surely derive it from this story! I couldn't stop laughing at the part where Mustadio sarcastically told Balthier to jump off Mt. Germinas!

I'm not much of MustadioxAgrias fan, nor any other Agrias x (some guy/girl) pairing for that matter, but your story is so good that I really didn't care whether it contained a pairing or not! Excellent job, little to no mistakes. Love it!

You are amazingly well versed in you style and structure. On that note alone this was a great read. But also your careful hints at the relationship were well done. Thoroughly enjoyable all in all.

Very well written. You've gotten all of the characters down well, and I don't see any flaws aside from a grammatical error from time to time.

You also got Mustadio down perfect, as well as Balthier in my eyes. I'm more of a Ramza/Agrias shipper, as it seems to hold water better, but I'm amused by Mustadio's pining after her. Your bit about Marach's brother complex is spot on too!

Excellent writing.

Despite not ever really having considered this pairing before (and still preferring others for the two in question), this was very well done. And that new event in FFT:LW does seem to have some significance.

Very well done. I'm happy I found this, especially just after a good-humored discussion with some friends about the matter.

Ah, a great story! I love how it flows. ^_^ I'm glad that I wasn't the only who thought they would make a pair or at least Mustadio seeing her in a different way. I'm very glad. Great work!

You have a great writting style. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. There was a lot of great humor in this and I liked how you wrote the interactions between Mustadio and the others. It was all very believable to me and well written. I look forward to reading more from you.

~2SSC