Uwaah. This should be updated!
This is a great story. And a very amazing writer.

please more!

Awwwww sucha cute fanfic! And i loved the way they confessef to each other! XD Everything starting with a misunderstanding... gawd what i could give to have a tail that moves.. and no, i'm not a furry fan... AT ALL.. but i like long tails... . XD HOT Kitty Fate SEXY Bunny Nanoha 3 HALLOWIN 3 XD

next next please

Ahh okay where to start? Well first and for most i shpuld tell you that i started of not likeing this story. And i mean not at all. I always thought that Nanoha had a little bit more control over her tounge than that but then again its your story so i won't complain. They only thing that kept me in to this was Vivio's unintentional telling of Nanoha and Fate To Nanohas family. After that i decided to keep reading becasue that was pretty funny. After Fates unintentional attack on Fate i started not to hate it anymore. And when Fate said that she would give her and Nanoha a try; even before they kissed a thought occured to me. The more I started to read the more i relized something. This is very realstic. And i mean ultra real. If Nanoha and Fate ever did confess to each other it would probly be like this. When I came to this conclusion I instantly fell madly in love with it. It was raw and gritty and anger inducing and funny and tear jerking, and mouse throwingly awesome. I think that most stories should be written like this. In end all that really needs to be said is the fact that this was an awesome story and i give it five stars

aw! so cute, i hope u could continue it, i would like to read more about their life with vivio like an couple now XD

Huh... I'm not sure what to make of the status. It's marked in-progress, but you haven't updated in a while, and it looks like it might be complete... well, if it isn't, I hope you'll continue this!

Anyways, as for the fic itself: well done. I'll admit, I was a little uncertain about all the fighting in the first chapter, but I enjoyed this, especially the way you made Nanoha the seme for once (the others I've read from you have had Fate as the seme). Thank you very much! I especially loved Fate's comment to Hayate when she saw Nanoha's outfit!

Funny as all hell and good. I love it. Great job. Hope to see more in the future from you.

aw nice fic. :D

i really enjoy reading it. x3

it's here 02:19 am and i'm only awake by now,to read this. hehe. :D

nicely done.

:)

I love Nanofate and your story

update please!

Love it, keep up the great work. I hope you write more. Adding to favorite Stories. again great story.

that was great, i was even crying too. keep up the great work.

i hope to see more of this soon _

I wish you would update this story coz it's getting too good! Stripping the cat suit off Fate would have been so much fun. :)