that was awesome plz considering writing something else like maybe Gabriel searching for Grace or something!

Good job! hmm...gabe swallow his male pride? interesting! :) lol really good job..does anyone know if they are coming out with a GK4 any time soon? I cry everytime i play GK3 cause of the end and i want my misery put to ease!

i am a big gk fan and i thought that was awesome please write more

Very good.You're a talented writer

Awsome, I love the GK series, and if you don't already know, Jane Jensen isn't planning to make another GK game, but she might write another book, which is sad because it is such a unique series, I really like this story, one of the few great GK fanfics. Keep up the great work!

Nice little story. I think that you caught the emotional tension in the scene quite well. Good work.