this is amazing and i love it, i do hope you'll add more to this one day.

WOW. I LIKE UR STORY VERY MUCH!

The story is a great read. Good storyline and the chemistry that Sub-Zero and Kitana had in her dreams was very intense! Too bad it wasint real. It was precised and straight to the point. No spelling errors nor any other mistakes. Again, great story for I am also a fan of the MK series!

Oh my, that was beautifully written and the pairing was wonderful.
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