Fantastic work! :)

Great story! You did an awesome job at writing it! You are an excelant writer! I loved it! Please write more!

very good. i thought it could've been longer. but, it was still good. was your computer messed up? because there were no apostrophies or quotation marks where there should've been.

What a well written chapter! Brilliant - can't wait for the next chapter.

This is a thrilling start to what could be a longer story. (I know you weren't planning on one.) This must be about Joe because Adam had read to him when he was younger and because his eyes were green. The Bible reference was also a good clue. I love Joe stories, especially when he is hurt and/or suffering, so this is a winner in my view.


I would be even more enthusiastic and lengthy in my review except that I hate encouraging you with one story when you haven't finished "You Can Count on Me".

ooh...me like.

So far so good, I hope you continue the story it is great. I love how you don't really tell us who it is, just little hints the color of his eyes, the gloves. Good stuff. I can't wait to read the rest. Thank you.

I really enjoyed your story. I'm wondering if it is Joe or Hoss that is trapped. Looking forward to chapter 2, so hurry back!