very cute...and hot! tastefully written. i didn't cringe at all. loved it. great job!

For someone who doesn't think themself "sucking" in writing romantic love scenes... you're nuts.

That was brilliant! Wonderful imagery, and just dripping with smex. Loved it.

Awesomely awesome, man!!

This is the best Zelda x Link i've read so far, well done

also check my story, it's not romantic (after the first chapter) but it's Zelda and that's what matters, right?

Wow, that was really...oh, I have to say it, THAT WAS SO COL!

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i dont even know what zelda is but that was hot!
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You write lemons as well? Amazing. Did you take a writing class or something like that? I think you could easily become a professional writer if you wanted. Good job!

Woah! That was freaking amazing. I've never heard of a guy who wrote lemons though, lol. You should hit me up sometime, I have a myspace.

holy crap, can you write a lemon! i got to read the others that inspired this kickass fic!

...That was HOT...

Woah, baby.

YES! A LEMON! Your story collection is now COMPLETE!

But don't let that stop you from writing more... namely a lemoncoughcough.

Good story. It's odd and yet satisfying to see that my stories have helped to inspire others...especially one as good as this. Keep up the good work.

OMG, that was HOT! write more!

Yay! Congrats SirJoshizzley on the first lemon you've posted. It was quite an entertaining read as I very much enjoyed Charm Bracelet. Please write some more. You are wonderful deer! :) Keep up the good work and thanks for the "Timeless" promo. ;)

-silkysun-

Ah, yes! I've been waiting for a lemon from you since THAT scene in Sensei. -Very- hot, I require more! =)